let me lean, let me lag
let me sleep another day
the world is a road hard
i’ve known and read
i dont want to win them prizes all
buckle up is not what I do
let me blow it up in smoke instead
lazy am I and let me be so
let me earn a little less
let me live a little more
don’t take away that bed from me
Its those dreams I live for
A moment, a thought is where I live
minutes and years are not for me to see
Stairs and roads I don’t take
Floating in the clouds is my race
Life, it never was a servant
Should I even try?
won’t comment on the content, but it’s definitely a very well articulated piece. And looks brutally honest, too!
“har fiqr ko dhuye mein urata chala gaya”…. π π π
suits you the best π … awesome writing
@ Aniket : Why no comment on the content :P??
@ Kristin : eggzactly.. and btw you can comment with either of the 2 names, know you by both wont be confused..
@ Piyush : Haan be wrote out my life’s philosophy.. π
“let me earn a little less
let me live a little more
donβt take away that bed
Its those dreams I live for”
these are the best lines i acc to me… π
after a long time its a post of ur kind π
vry well expressed….
Well I’ll comment both on the content and the presentation… content is honest and represent what many of us think about and feel (at least I do…) so I loved it… and on top of that… the choice of words is beautiful … so full 10/10 … great work !! π
like it
love it
awesome !!!
and this poem is a “dream” π .. lets c if u can try …
requiem for a dream
shaandaar……..
completely describes you, man!!!