A girl I Love

That childish smile
That mind beyond years

The complete submission
That hot dominance

Those tomboyish choices
The girlish charms

That challenging dominance
That unquestioning approval

The dependable guide
The hopeless traveler

Those hot tops
The demure kurtis

Those fiery eyes
The subtle looks

All the signs of a girl
A girl I love

28 thoughts on “A girl I Love

  1. @ Ganje : Kahan be humari kismat kahan aisi.. Hum to bas khwabon ke par laga ke udte hain aajkal🙂
    @ Vivek :🙂
    @ Kunal : Thnx
    @ Vipul : Mujhe lag hi raha tha… tu koi aklmandi wala comment dega…😛 Zyada buddhi mat daudao!

  2. nice🙂
    “That challenging dominance
    That unquestioning approval”
    i liked these lines in particular….coz its soo important for the girl u love to have an unquestioning approval for whatever u say…..🙂

    Like…

  3. Pankaj : what do you mean by “keep the author in mind”😀
    Archisha : not exactly, i dont want a girl to have approval for whatever I say, but yeah some things..😛
    S : as the title says.. “A Girl”

  4. 🙂 simple and subtle… yet an amazing composition..
    this is how this feeling makes us feel that the person we love is most beautiful…and we can go on with the most perfect combinations of words to express the eternity of relation.. yet there always remains something unexpressed, theres always something more to add!!

    1. Thanks man.. Yeah true, there’s always something you can add, coz love isnt an emotion you can express in a poem or through words.. Its just there to be felt!🙂

        1. He he sorry.. So sorry!!😐 My bad…
          Sorry woman!😛
          Hopefully you will keep commenting in future, so that I get more chances of correcting this folly of mine😀

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